the assignment was to write a formal letter :
Andi Jenna
Siebenplaneten str
44829 Bochum
Inhabitants
48 Lunar ave 13 November 2004
Sea of Tranquility
The Moon
0001
To whom it may concern,
I am writing to express my intrest in your student exchange program.
I read about your program in "The Puddle" edition #24 October 2004.
I have heard excellent reports of your program.
I am interested in becoming involved by particpating in an exchange
at the commencement of next year, for 12 months. I have been taking
´Lunar Cycle´classes for the past 2 years and have also achieved a high
distinction in my last thesis in ´Lupa Lunius` with special
acknowlodgements on my use of the language.
II am sending my references in the hope that there is still a place avaliable
in the program. I am interested if you could provide me with further
details as to avaliability and costs associated with this program.
Kind Regards
A.jenna*
Andi Jenna
So anyway here´s hoping my english teacher has a sense of humour or doesn´t
know enough english to get that I am sending her up. Well not her her assignment.
So next year I begin VCE and am interested in comments about subjects so once
again click the leave a comment button and comment.
5 comments:
she didn´t raise aneyelid.
I formally reply to your blog.
from M, N, R, N
Dear Miss Fraser
It seems somewhat remiss of me not to point out that you have failed to respond to my comment posted last week. Could we expect your early response to it, or not?
Yours disdainfully
M
i formally reply to your reply and sincerly apologise for my lateness.
MMmmm - my proof reading found a few spelling errors. Pehaps a little more focus on the Oxford English being offered while you're there may help. The difficulty when in a country where English isn't there first language is that everyone speaks the language PROPERLY. That's not to say that it's actually better or makes sense, just that it doesn't sound retarded!
As for VCE subjects, it is so far out of my world that everything you are thinking of taking I find extremely impressive. N
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